America's Flag

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By Alayne Fenasci

Allegiance

Source: (c) 2008 Alayne Fenasci Floyd

That Flag

That flag with the blood in it,
purity in it,
loyalty in it.
That flag with the country beneath it,
army beneath it,
people beneath it.
That flag with the rivers in it,
sky in it,
light in it.
That flag over the bank building,
city hall,
neighbor's yard.
That flag hanging from the embassy post,
makeshift war camp,
aircraft carrier.
That flag folded by Marines at a funeral,
aides after a political rally,
boy scouts at sunset.
That flag sold out at stores every summer,
overstocked at Halloween,
out of season by Christmas.

Its colors might fade over time,
but they never run.
Its stitches might fray in the wind,
but they never blow away.
Its spirits might cry when forgotten,
but they never forget.

That flag is mine.

Comments

Alison Dittmar profile image

Alison Dittmar 14 months ago

Wonderful poem! Quite a tribute to our American Flag! Thanks for sharing.

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russian_spygirl82 14 months ago

Incredible artistry. The visual picture is strong and the flow is exquisite.

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Alayne Fenasci Hub Author 14 months ago

Thank you both for the compliments. The photo was taken outside the Inn at Carnall Hall by the Fayetteville campus of University of Arkansas the night of my wedding to the man in the picture. :) Random fact.

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Christopher Floyd 14 months ago

I am impressed. This is very good. Can I have a written copy?

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Alayne Fenasci Hub Author 14 months ago

Sure, Chris, I'll set you up.

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James A Watkins Level 8 Commenter 13 months ago

Awesome poem! I love it. Thank you for sharing your poetic gifts.

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deedeelaw 12 months ago

I absolutely loved it.

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Alayne Fenasci Hub Author 12 months ago

Thank you for the compliments, James and Deedee. It is one I was particularly glad to share.

Husky1970 10 months ago

A wonderful and patriotic poem. Loved it.

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mobias Level 2 Commenter 7 months ago

Very nice. It has style, without being a typical faux-patriotic, naive chant! Very nice indeed.

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Alayne Fenasci Hub Author 2 weeks ago

So many "tributes" to our country and its flag do have a false ring to them, mobias. Thank you for the compliment that this is not one of them. Nothing about me is false, and I am pleased this comes out in my writing, particularly on this topic.

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